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PostSubject: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:10 am

Incomplete

Chapter 01 – I Never Knew You

“See you tomorrow? Max chirped, waving and grinning insanely at Tyson as he let himself in through the front door. “Yeah tomorrow, bye” He groaned, it had been yet another boring day at school, where he had spent the entire day wondering when it would be over. He let himself in and slumped down into his bed. “What now? He thought to himself. He gazed around his room. Nothing seemed to excite him anymore.

Tyson pulled open his draw, grabbing a familiar toy he had long forgotten. He stared down at the white object in his hand, the bit glistened under the artificial light “Long time no see dragoon” He murmured to himself. Tyson hadn’t bladed in so long.

At his school, he didn’t know anyone who had even heard of bladeing, let alone wanted to play, and after Hiro and his dad left, he had no one to blade against. Sure his friends at school were into many of the same things he was, but none of them bladed.

Since he and his grandpa moved to this new town 3 years ago, He hadn’t bladed once. He had thought many times about trying to introduce Max, Rei and Kenny to the sport, but then he figured that would just make fun of the fact that he was still playing with spinning tops when he was sixteen. And besides, Kenny was too interested in ICT, Rei seemed more amused with his martial arts, and as for Max, Well he still hadn’t got Max figured out yet. Even after 3 years of knowing him. He was just Max, the American guy, who was fun to hang out with, and did nothing but spend all his money on candy so he could get his sugar fix.

Tyson sadly smiled at his blade, it brought back all sorts of memories, he remembered when he used to spend hours of his time training to be champ one day, boy did he have a dream. Hiro Had promised to enter the Official beybladeing tournament with him, as they had to enter in pairs, But as life goes, something came up, And Hiro was rushed out of town, along with Tyson’s dad, and then the next thing he knew he was being whist away to another part of the country with his gramps. Moving house, moving school, and No one seemed to know what beybladeing was, it seemed almost extinct. So Tyson put his blade aside, and started with his new life. Every now and again though, he would open that draw and hold onto dragoon, gaze into the happy…and the sad memories it held within.

He smiled once more, before placing it vastly back in the draw, and rapidly closing it.

“Hey little dude, how’s it hanging, your homeboys on the line” Grandpa Granger announced passing the phone to Tyson as he burst in through the door.
“Grandpa, you ever heard of knocking, jeez? But his grandpa had already made an escape. Tyson lent back into his pillow as he picked up the phone.

“Hello? He asked.

“Hey Tyson, you wanna hang out?” Max asked, knowing that he had scene Tyson less than an hour ago after finishing school. Tyson grinned. Max always did that, phoned up Tyson shortly after school to hang out, Tyson didn’t mind, it really wasn’t like he had much to do.

“Sure, why not” Tyson replied, hearing a sound of glee from the other end of the phone.

“Great, we’re all going to meet at Kenny’s” Max informed

“Oh, will Rei be there too then” Tyson asked, hoping he would get to spend time with all his friends.

“He sure will” Max laughed. Both of them soon said goodbye and see you soon. It never was a long conversation. Tyson quickly got dressed into a tight red skin shirt and a pair of black jeans, he didn’t usually wear tight clothes, but it was all he had clean, besides, it wasn’t like he had a poor physique, so he could get away with it, which in the end, was a surprise considering how much junk food he stuffed himself with.

Tyson soon arrived, and was starting to feel suspicious as to why Max had gathered the three of them round Kenny’s, not to mention the fact that when he walked up into Kenny’s room, they were sitting round in a circle and it looked like they were scheming something.

“Err Guys, what’s going on? Tyson asked, waiting quite patiently for an answer.

They looked round at each other as Rei replied. “Well Tyson, since you moved here, we realized that you seemed like you were missing something” Max continued from Rei “Yeah, I mean, you always seem really board and un amused at anything, even that time we went to fun land theme park, you still seemed distracted, So we decided” Kenny finished off from Max’s sentence “Since you don’t seem interested in any of the clubs at school, or the activities the town has to offer, we would introduce you to something called the internet” Tyson grumbled “Do you think I’m stupid? I know what the internet is” Kenny laughed “Yes but do you use it? Tyson laughed louder “Heck no, I’m not a geek” (No, he was a beybladeing one). Kenny felt a little insulted at that comment. “Tyson, you don’t have to be a geek to go online, I mean even me and Max use the internet now” Rei stated. Tyson’s eyes narrowed “Yeah, so what’s so good about it?

Kenny stepped forward to his laptop “Let me explain, You can type in anything, and find out interesting facts, things you never could imagine can be spoken off and explained online” Tyson groaned “That’s all great and all, but it still sounds boring” Max sighed “Wait a moment Tyson, let Kenny finish. Kenny carried on. “And you go on forums and chat rooms, with people from all over the word, talk about anything, and everything, we realize Tyson, that you have a lot of differences to us, well you can go online and find people who have more of the same interests as you” Tyson’s eyebrows indented further. “I don’t see what you’re getting at, are you guys dumping me? Max smiled as he explained “No, not at all. Its just, I remember that time when you spoke to me about that sport you loved, oh what was it, Beybladeing or something, it was the only time I ever saw you look so intense and alive, you had so much passion in your eyes, I could feel it running through your veins, when you briefly touched the subject, you intensified. Well online you would probably be able to find others who like it to" Tyson’s eyes widened at the word beybladeing. “Really, you can talk to others who like beybladeing?!!” Max nodded “Yep, and you may even find someone locally that you could meet with” Tyson’s soul ignited once more. This was great, the internet he thought. Maybe his bladeing days weren’t over just yet. “Okay then show me some sites where I can meet people” Tyson slurred “Suddenly excited by the phenomenon that was the internet.

Kenny smiled “I don’t know any sites in particular, but if you built up your status on websites like myspace.com, facebook.com and even deviantart.com people will be able to find you or come across you.

Tyson still seemed pretty confused. “Deviantart? He asked, He had heard of myspace, he had also heard quite a lot of bad things about this myspace? As for deviantart, he had never heard of that. And facebook, well he had heard that that was just a dummies version of myspace. What a load of baloney. He laughed, Fixated on the website that was Deviantart.com.

Kenny fidgeted.

“What’s this deviantart.com you speak off? He asked once more. Rei explained “Deviantart.com is a website, mainly for artists and the creative type; it allows people to upload art, stories, photos ect to the world. So basically, you could upload pictures of yourself and your beyblade, its just a long shot as DA Is an artist website, but it may attract someone, you could make yourself a journal saying how your looking for others who enjoy the sport, Talk about you, sell yourself to the public.

“You want me to sell myself? Tyson giggled. Chief just gave him a flushed look. “Tyson, we didn’t mean it quite like that” Tyson continued to giggle. “So how do I set this thing up? He asked idiotically.

The evening went on a forever as Kenny showed him how to use certain programs and sign up with websites, it took a while for him to get his head around it, going online seemed a lot harder than learning to beyblade.

Tyson got home late that night, but he wasn't tired, he fired up his old style windows XP, That had been sitting in the corner for years unused. Stairing at the screen, he double clicked on the firefox logo, a new window shortly opening at his command, he typed into the web bar, www.deviantart.com and up came a pale green looking website, full of stunning photo's and artwork, He stared at the screen for about 10 minutes before spotting the 'sign up' button, he clicked it and then he began to make himself and account.

"Hmmmm, it's asking me for a username and email address????'' Tyson groaned, "Well kenny made me an email address, so that’s fine, but a username? hmm how about 'Kinomiya The Greatest'.....NO, That sounds too bold, hmmmm?

He paused, grinning as he thought....

"Ahh, Yeah" 'The-Dragon-Blader'

"Yeah, That sounds amazing" And now a password?!!! He a soon came up with a password. Right, now its asking me for details.

He followed the instructions and carried on filling in the gaps, only filling in the answers he thought were necessary, then when he was done, he uploaded his Icon followed by a Picture of himself, and a journal describing himself a little more... He wrote...

Hi, My Name is Takao Kinomiya (Tyson Granger), I have brown Eyes and Midnight Blue hair, and if you ask me I would say that I'm pretty damn good looking, haha, I'm not too tall, but I'm not all that short. I love a lot of things, like pizza, and food, and hanging out with my friends....But there's one thing, that I adore above all else, That’s BEYBLADEING!!!! My super cool bit beast Dragoon and I have been by each others side since day 1, and I used to always beyblade back when I lived down south Japan, but since then, I moved away to live with my Grandfather in this isolated town, where it seems like Beybladeing doesn’t exist, I have made loads of new friends, and have had loads of fun, but I just can't forget about beybladeing, ever since I put my blade away just over 3 years ago, all I think about day in and day out is beybladeing, I remember they way I felt when I used to blade, and I can't shake off that feeling, I feel so lost in this town, and I would do anything to have a beybattle once again. If there's anyone out there who lives near by, or would wanna battle me, I would be honored to take you on. Even if there's someone who reads this and just talks to me about Beybladeing, it's a start, I would do anything to have my passion revived, but at this rate I'm feeling like I can do nothing to make this go away and unless I do something dragoon will be in my bedside draw forever!

Please contact me if you wanna talk. Thanks

The-Dragon-Blader

He smiled at the screen what he had wrote had come completely from his heart, and if someone happen to stumble across it, and then talk to him, it would have been worth the time he had taken to write it. He had hope that maybe he would be able to take dragoon out of that dark draw and into the light. Soon.

He shortly closed the window, yawning as he did so, man this internet lark was tiring, He switched his P.C off and threw himself into his bed, letting the bed incase his aching back with softness. Silently he slept that night, Tyson was known for his loud dribbling and snoring when he slept, but not that night, the thoughts of someone finding him, the hopes he had revived for a bey-battle rivaled intensely inside his encased heart, made his sleeping still as the night, and the only noise to be heard, were whistles of the owls hooting by his window into the early morning and the few grasshoppers that were buzzing around in the grass.

Tyson jumped up from his sleep, grabbing his broken alarm clock, complaining how late he was gonna be, realizing that he had completely over slept, he hurried around his room, trying to put his underwear over his trousers. "Man, I'm sooo late" He cried.

"Tyson!!!!!" Grandpa granger shouted, alarming Tyson even more as he hopped around his room. "What do you want grandpa?" He hollowed back, still skipping over the mess that was he bedroom.

Tyson heard his grandpa's voice get louder as he finally found his jacket. Grandpa Granger stuck his head through the door and bellowed "Tyson, If you stay up all night playing your hip games on line, then of course you snooze and lose all track off time" Tyson stressed "Grandpa, would you mind, I'm half naked and your giving me a lecture" He finished finally reversing his underwear so that they were now under his trousers in stead of over them. "Well if you weren’t up all night..." Tyson soon interfered. "Ahh grandpa, I haven’t got time for this" Grandpa granger snorted "And whose fault is that? Tyson grabbed his bag and pelted out the door, a bit gutted that he had woken up so late, he couldn't check to see if anyone had replied to him.

Tyson soon arrived skidding in and colliding with his desk "Hey everyone sorry I'm late" He laughed picking up his chair and plunking down into it.

Max looked round at his friend who had arrived late, AGAIN, But today something seemed different, that look on his face, like a light had been ignited, Tyson was always late, and lateness was soon followed by Tyson crashing his head down on the desk, then snoring, but not today, he was beaming? Max smiled. Had they finally got through to Tyson, Max looked round at Kenny and Rei, all of them holding the same thoughts.

Tyson had so much more to give. He wasn’t just a lazy empty kid, with nothing to influence him and inspire him, there was something more, something they all never knew.

And that something was Beybladeing.

TBC

((Will add more chapters as they come along))

All likeness of Beyblade is © HUDSON SOFT/TAKARA/HASBRO, BEYBLADE PROJECT, TV TOKYO, Nelvana


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PostSubject: Chapter 02 Part 01   Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:23 am

Chapter 02 – No Place To Go

Tyson zoned out completely during physics, there wasn’t anything more boring than a bunch of scientific crap about energy, force, and motion, and the way they relate to each other. His eye’s were drifting at each and every passing minute, he was trying so hard to keep them open.

Finally the bell rang for lunch, Tyson was becoming impatient, he was so desperate to get home to see if he had a reply, it was all that clouded his mind every single passing moment.

He sat down with Max and Rei, Enjoying his lunch, he had pizza today, he didn’t’t talk much, truth was Tyson was so tired he didn’t’t have the energy to speak. Especially after that lesson.

He just drifted in and out of Max and Rei’s conversations every now and again, their laughing seemed like it slowed down as he daydreamed in and out of focus.

“So Tyson what are your thoughts? Rei asked snapping his attention. His eye’s shot open.

“What? Tyson blinked “Sorry" He sighed "I’m not with it” he added. “Are you sure you’re alright Tyson, you don’t look good? Max asked, Tyson yawned once more “Yeah, it’s just I’m so tired and my mind is elsewhere” Max laughed “No change there then? Tyson glared at him for that comment.

“So where exactly is your mind Tyson? Rei asked. “ I just wanna go home check to see if anyone has messaged me” Max smiled “Did you upload any picture’s? Tyson looked blank “Err, no I just put in a description of myself” Max frowned “Well that’s no good Tyson, how will anyone find you based on a journal? Tyson felt stupid, But max had a point, what an idiot, now he wanted to get home even more so he could put up a Pic of himself and dragoon.

There were always moments like this when he just wanted the day to end, but it seemed to go on forever, eventually it did come to and end. Thankfully for Tyson.

The afternoon’s sunset was drifting in, a range of oranges and red’s filled the cloudy sky, the final bell rang for home. Tyson stretched, before jumping up from his seat and grasping his aching shoulders, “Man, I hate literature” He grumbled, grabbing his bag and leaving the classroom” He hated every lesson…At least literature was the one that signified the end of the day. He should have been greatful for at least that.

He rushed home to his P.C, firing it up only to receive disappointment, “Man I should have uploaded something” He started posing with Dragoon for a pic, so people could witness him and his blade” He smiled as he held dragoon in his left hand. “That picture’s perfect! He shouted. Soon finding himself being interrupted by his Grandpa “TYSON!” Grandpa granger shouted “Would you keep your pumping thumping voice down” A sweat drop appeared on Tyson’s head “Well, your one to talk, shouting my name that loudly at night” Grandpa granger paced over and flicked him in the face “Just keep the cracking racket down would ya” He grumbled, soon leaving Tyson to his own demise.

He wondered over to his bed and chucked himself into it, he had uploaded the picture, Now what? Wait for a reply, He was getting sick of waiting. He plunged back up from his duvet, and decided to learn some more about his P.C, afterall he had had it since forever. He randomly clicked on a programme with a little green person for an icon, MSN? He thought, What’s that? He really was clueless about computers...

“It’s asking me for an email address and password, he quickly filled in his Email and password he used on hot mail, Success, Welcome to msn” He was greeted by a talking voice. His eyes widened at the screen, many windows popped up. Rei and Kenny were both online. He was quite surprised that it worked.

He opened one of the flashing windows “Hey Tyson it’s Kenny, I see you figured out how to use msn? Tyson blinked “Kenny? What’s this? Kenny sent a smiley “It’s MSN, It means we can message instantly instead of email, which you have to wait for reply, get it?

Tyson smiled “Yeah I get it” He clicked on the other flashing window “Hey Ty” it read. Tyson looked at the name, “Hey Rei” he replied. “You figured out how to use msn then? Rei asked, Tyson replied with a nodding smiley.

The 3 of them entered a join conversation and spoke long into the night, until eventually, sleep could not be avoided no longer.

Tomorrow soon came, Once again Tyson had arrived in school late, and was having to face a tardy for it. “A hole week of detentions, That’s not fair” He complained his teacher soon following his response “Well you should learn to be in on time then” She informed, Tyson sighed. At least they were only break time detentions, it wasn’t like he was missing his lunch or having to stay after school. Then he really would have something to piss and groan about. Still, if the teacher thought that giving Tyson a week of detentions would get him in on time, she really was crazy, like a week of detentions would be something painful enough to distract him from that cosy bed. No she would have to think of a better solution than that.

Today steadily went by, Lunch soon approached, Maybe now that he was missing his 15 minute break times, the day seemed to pass quicker at the thought of getting some food inside him drained the time.

Max waved at Tyson as he sat in the corner table of the lunch room, scoffing down his hotdog and fries, man, it felt good to eat.

Max soon joint his friend. “Hey Tyson, you really need to get in on time? Max lectured, seeing Tyson huff. “Ah man, leave off, I get enough of that from gramps ya know, and now all this detention business, besides it lunch now, let me eat in peace would ya? Max laughed “Yeah sorry” He giggled, his hand held against his lip.

Max shuffled trying to get comfortable, he couldn’t, those school chairs were ridiculously hard, and impossible to sit comfortable in “So Tyson, this Beybladeing business, I know I haven’t really ever given it the time of day, but then I suppose I never asked, so what is it about beybladeing that drives you with such intensity? I mean, the look in your eyes whenever the subject is brushed is just so immense”

Tyson’s eyes sparkled “It’s everything” He gloated, continuing with such glee “It’s the entire sport, the battling, the driving force to make you become better and better, the intense and totally wicked battles, this amazing adrenaline that fills you with complete fear that each and every battle is different, and you can never determine the outcome. It’s the way the blood pumps in my veins as I grasp victory, and the disappointment in my heart when I lose a battle. The sheer determination for a re match, to prove that you can win, the entire game, It‘s just EVERYTHING” Tyson stood up from his chair, He got a little carried away as he threw his arms around, so stuck into what he was saying. Max’s pupils widened, He loved seeing Tyson like this, he was now seeing, that there was more to this spinning top business, There must be for a reaction like this in Tyson of all people.

Truth was, Max really didn’t know Tyson at all, The passion he just witnessed, that was the real Tyson, the one he barley got to see. The Tyson that somehow faded 3 years ago.

After Tyson reached over and gulped down his Pepsi, he continued “Unless your me of course, I always win, well most of the time” Tyson laughed. “But that’s all thanks to my bro, Hiro, he taught me so much when we were younger” Tyson smiled as Max blinked a few times “So you’re quite talented at bladeing then? Tyson sneered “Talented, No, not really, it takes lots of training and hard work, I’m only good cause I practiced, day after day, but now, my skills are probably as basic as they were I first bladed, It’s been, so long, and I can’t even imagine how sketchy my bladeing has become, not only that but I feel a real distance between me and dragoon, I don’t think he like’s it In that draw, maybe his scared of the dark” He cackled to himself. “Man I’m funny” Tyson laughed. Max was still mesmerized by Tyson’s little outburst of passion.

“Dragoon? That’s the name of your Beyblade right?” Max asked as Tyson smiled, noticing how intrigued max was becoming, Maybe he could be converted, Tyson carried on inflicting Max with all the wonders of Beybladeing, and informing him about his Bit beast dragoon and how wicked he was. “Dragoon is my bit beast, his an ancient spirit of a dragon, who just happens to be encased within my blade, I use his power to amp up my blade, when I’m bladeing me and him become one, but sometimes we don’t always agree, which has caused me to lose battles at times, but when we are in sync, I feel like I can hear his thoughts and fears, and I feel like I can do anything, that’s why beybladeing is so amazing, it takes you away from everything you know, nothing else matters, but the battle, you can forget time and place, all your problems just fade away when your caught in the intensity of the battles” Tyson rubbed his head, a small sweat drop appearing, “It’s kind of hard to explain” He laughed, Seeing a totally envious look on Max’s face.

“Tyson, I never knew, If this is how strongly you felt, why in the world did you stop, no matter what you should have carried on? Then a serious look hit Tyson’s features.

“It’s not” Tyson paused for a brief second “It’s not really that I ever wanted to stop, it was just so hard for me, being taken away from all the things that were important to me, at that point in time, I felt so lost, when I came here no one knew what it was, and I….Well I guess I thought it would be easier to just start over, I mean my mother died when I was incredibly young and my brother and father went away, it was just all so much, and I know gramps would never say it, but it’s never been easy for him, I mean, he has been landed the job of parenting me, and I just wanted to make things easier for him, I tried my best to move on and start over, I knew I had to forget everything that meant something to me, start a new life here, cause otherwise, I would just be making things harder for him, I had to move on, to do that, I had to forget beybladeing.

Max smiled sadly “But you haven’t forgotten beybladeing at all have you, not even for a second, it’s something that has always been with you hasn’t it?”

Tyson scratched his head “Yep, you see right through me, I just can’t seem to shake the damn sport off, Even if it looks like I’m not all that fussed, the truth is, It’s killing me” Tyson stared into his bottle of Pepsi, eyeing down the brown fizzy fluid that bubbled within.

Max’s eyes narrowed “Tyson, I think it’s admirable, you gave up the one thing that is obviously your entire world, for your grandpa, for all the people you care about to make things easier for them” Tyson smiled as Max become a little more serious “But now, I think your through with thanking people, it’s your turn to be selfish and do something for yourself, it’s been 3 years right? Tyson nodded “I could never be selfish, But I am going to try to go back, to how I was…”

Max frowned “Don’t go back, simply start over, Never stop searching Tyson, Not now I’ve seen the true you, the one who has to have beybladeing in his life to even survive, you can‘t ever stop, until your satisfied” Tyson agreed, He knew that it was now or never, this time he knew he had to do everything in his power he could to get beybladeing back into his life, he gave up on it once, he couldn‘t do that again. Max was right, as long as he keep’s trying, eventually, it will happen. He will find a solution, to this desolate town and get himself recognized, for being number one. Tyson smiled once more at Max as he continued “I know that without beybladeing in your life, you will never be happy, Tyson, from the moment I met you I thought you seemed lost, and this is why, I understand that beybladeing means a lot to you now, you need to follow your dreams when times get tough, not burry them….always remember that. Max grinned standing up in answer to the end of lunch bell as he patted Tyson on the shoulder. Max carried over his lunch tray to the stack where the dirty plates were, and walked out. Tyson sat for a moment in thought, the words Max had just spoken replaying in his mind “follow your dreams, don’t burry them” Tyson grinned. Don’t worry max, now I’ve started, I don’t plan to give up this time, not without a fight, I will keep searching until I find people who want to blade.I won’t be left with no place to go. Tyson stood up, gazing around the lunch hall, hurrying over to the bin; he threw his rubbish in and made his way towards to class.

“Tyyyysoooonnnn!!!!! A husky voice shouted, Tyson looked round to see Rei calling him, he suddenly stopped and waited for Rei to catch up “Hey Tyson, How’s it going, I haven’t seen you all day” Tyson yawned “I’m good thanks Rei, just tired and desperate to get home to my P.C, ”
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PostSubject: Chapter 02 Part 02   Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:24 am

“HA! Your hooked” Rei laughed “The Internet does that to you, but then it no surprise after last night, man I was tired too this morning, you can sure talk a lot” Tyson nodded, “Yeah, it’s strange I’ve been so desperate to get online all day, even after spending all night yesterday chatting to you guys” He rose a single eyebrow, he never though he would become a computer geek overnight like he had.

Rei Laughed “Be grateful you have internet at home, Imagine how hard it is for me, I only get to use the net when I go to Kenny’s” Rei chuckled scratching his chin. But seriously, that pissed him off a lot. Tyson nodded “Yeah, Guess there is that” He finished.

Tyson stood in thought for a moment “Wait a second, How was you online at the same time as Kenny then if you don’t have the net hu, and that late as well? Tyson asked, Feeling very confused.

Rei blushed “I was at a friends” Tyson giggled as he noticed Rei getting all flustered “Oh, a friends Hu??, doesn’t happen to be your girlfriends does it? Tyson teased Rei shook his head quickly “No No!!! It was just Max’s” He stated. Tyson felt even more confused now “Wait a sec, if it was only Max’s why were you there that late on a school night, and why were you just blushing?

Rei was speechless “Err, That’s cause I was round studying with him real late, and I wasn’t blushing, I guess it’s just hot out here” Rei wobbled.

“Right? Tyson mumbled, now eager to get home. He quickly changed the what seemed to be awkward subject, Tyson didn’t really care where he was, either way he’d make fun, so it was probably better that Rei had lied, Well kinda anyway.

“Talking of Kenny I haven’t scene him at all today” Tyson asked, Rei frowned “That’s cause he spends all his time in the library” Rei informed. Tyson laughed out loud.

“Anyway, Catch ya later’z” Tyson announced making his escape, speaking with Rei was fun and all, but it was distracting him from getting to his P.C. And it was getting to the point where he couldn’t take it anymore. Just like how he was yesterday, It was true what they say, The internet is addictive.

He threw down his bag and jacket as he bombarded into the house, pegging it up the stairs as fast as his legs would allow. Firing up his P.C He got impatient as it took it’s sweet time to load, he found himself shouting abuse at the screen for not being quick enough, we all know how that feels. Damn electrical appliances.

He logged in and once again, he was hit with disappointment. Day by day went passed, each day the highlight being some slim hope that he had a reply, It was beginning to seem hopeless once more as he got nothing.

A month went by and still tidally squad.

As Tyson logged on DA about 3 months after his first post, He was frustrated to see he still had no comments or replies, to any of the messages he had taken the time to write out to other possible bladers and the pictures he had spent ages learning how to categories and upload correctly. He had spent the entire last week avoiding his P.C So that when he switched it on he might have had something.

Whilst scrolling down the page he noticed an activity bar appear, “What’s this? He thought clicking on the name that had added him to their watch list.

He read the name aloud ‘Crimson-Dranzer-Kai’ suddenly he felt a rush of adrenaline pump through his veins, sending numerous shivers down his spine, That name, it frazzled him, he furiously clicked on the name, quickly linking him to an amazing looking page.

A name like that, he had to be a beyblader…there was no doubt. Finally, was he going to get a result.

His eyes gazed at the large grey-slate chunks of hair showering the face of the boy in Russia which had appeared on the front page, and the bright triangle that were painted perfectly on his face, like some sort of tribal design. He clicked onto a different picture that came up on the front page in his gallery, seeing a Beyblade. He paused in thought for a moment “That’s a Bit-beast” The duel haired guy looked intense from these pictures. He clicked on the image to view it in full size, ‘wow, what a wicked blade’ Tyson stared, his eyes blistering at the blue and red beyblade that had a picture of a phoenix captured inside. He left an admiring comment.

“I'm Kai Hiwatari, A world champion beyblader, extremely famous in Russia. . .” Tyson read aloud. His eyes stung for a moment “This guy added me? Tyson thought. ‘But why’

As Kai had stared through Tyson’s profile on DA 2 hours earlier, he had been slightly intrigued, and a little mesmerized by what he had stumbled across…

‘There it is, and it isn’t a fake, captivated by the image he clicked on of ‘Takao and the legendary Dragoon’ , he decided to click on the user name.
‘The-Dragoon-Blader’ and check out the boys profile he scanned his eyes over the journal and picture descriptions.

“Hi, My names takao kinomiya That’s Tyson granger to you, I‘m kinda new on this whole internet thing, But anyway, my reason, I love to beyblade, no one in my town even knows what beybladeing is….He continued reading, stilll getting pulled in more and more every moment…Which was unlike him.

When Tyson signed on, He was automatically signed into MSN. Up popped a new message Bar.

‘Crimson-Dranzer-Kai’ Had added him on MSN. And what more he was sending a message which read… 'I like to blade too and your beyblade, It looks incredible, would love to take you on someday…“
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:17 pm

ZOMG! Amazing alternate fic! This adds a new excitment to the TyKa-ness! Keep it up love!
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:43 pm

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Lol, sorry about all the mistakes and such.,...i try tooo hard -updates-
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PostSubject: Chapter 03 – I Can’t Find No Rest part 01   Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:44 pm

Chapter 03 – I Can’t Find No Rest

Tyson stared at the screen for about 5 minutes, finally, some response. “Hey” Tyson replied, thinking about what to say next. “I would love to take you on too, I’d probably kick your butt” He warned. Smiling to himself Shame his in Russia, He thought.

Kai sat stunned in front of his computer screen, this was the first time ever that anyone had spoken to him like that in ages “Do you even know who I am kid? I said your blade looked interesting, I didn’t say it would ever stand a chance against me” Kai typed with angst. Stabbing the keyboard with his digits. Kai was very famous in Russia for his intense and amazing bladeing skills, Anyone who knew of him, would have never dared to speak to him like Tyson had just spoken to him, Tyson really didn’t have a clue who he was messing with. Then again, Knowing Tyson, it didn’t really matter that Kai was a professional beyblader or even if he were someone as high up as a king, he still would have spoken the same as always, that was just Tyson for ya. True and straight too the point.

Tyson huffed “Oh a wise guy Hu? Famous shameless, I still say I’d knock you down and out! Tyson typed sticking his tongue out at his P.C. Kai angered.

“I guess I’ll just have to hold you too that won’t I? He typed, biting down on the side of his lip, Kai felt a little intimidated, for the first time ever, this kid, just who was he anyway. No one had spoken to him with such force, so belief, Such intensity…In a LONG time, and it really did baffle him.

Tyson continued typing “bring it on, Me and Dragoon will crush you” He furiously typed.

Tyson sighed as he thought I say I could beat him, but my skills are not great, I mean I haven’t bladed in 3 years, He paused in though for a slight moment.… that’s it, tomorrow,… I’m gonna start training again, and I’m gonna be someone deserving a match against the reigning Russian champ. Tyson grinned, A new goal to set his sights towards. Would he really be able to go all the way to Russia though, just for a beybattle? That fact seemed impossible. But now that he had found…someone…No, This amazing blader, who actually wanted to face him, he knew, deep down, it was something he had to fight for, no matter how foolish it may have appeared on the outside.

Kai laughed a little “Tell you what kid” He typed, catching Tyson’s attention once more “You come over here to Russia, and you beat me, I’ll see that you’re recognized for your skills, and you can join up with me. Even though Kai knew it was next to impossible that they could ever battle, living so far apart or that Tyson could ever beat him, he couldn’t help but think his blade had some extreme power, from the picture he sat staring at when he first stumbled upon Tyson’s profile, that bit beast enclosed within, his blade has to be of some quality, it was almost like his own blade was sensing Tyson’s power, which meant HE had to be of some quality, and it was Kai’s ultimate goal, not only to take on everyone with a bit beats, to prove he was the best, but to also find a bladeing partner good enough to enter tournaments with him. Cause right now, there was no one who even came close to his standards, And meeting bladers like Tyson on the internet was his last leg. He had to find a partner, who could work with him within the next 6 months for the world wide beybladeing tournament. He was really cutting it short. But something about this boy, About Tyson, was drawing him in. And he just couldn’t turn away.

Suddenly Tyson felt nervous, He had just spent the last 5 minutes looking properly over Kai’s page on DA, And this Kai guy had a lot to back up all his bluffing, Maybe he had jumped in the deep end this time, but he couldn’t go back now, Tyson started to really admire and respect this Guy, Even though he wanted to take him, It was one thing to boast but when you had pictures up, like Kai did, showing all your trophies and medals, It was just something else, And he just seemed so incredible, if he was anything like his pictures and the skills he said he had, Tyson really had just hit the jackpot.

“Anyway I’m off… speak soon, Kai.” Suddenly an offline message appeared, Tyson blinked and felt a wave of disappointed flooded through him, his heart sinking quickly at his exit. “He could of at least waiting for me to reply” He gritted his teeth together and stumbled “What a jerk” he moaned. I had so much I wanted to say to him.

Tyson left his MSN running overnight, all the time appearing offline so he didn’t have too many people speaking to him at once, Controlling a beyblade was a piece of cake compared to getting swamped with 20 message bars all at once, Seriously, he couldn’t keep track of 2 people on the go, let alone 20...He sighed. But he was a little happier, At the fact that he was finally getting some results on the bladeing front.

He stared at Kai’s picture, blushing slightly as he tried to lead his prying eyes away, he couldn’t, This Kai guy had captivated him somehow, worryingly Tyson grabbed his shorts that had just tightened, and quickly clicked of the page. He squinted wondering why just looking at a picture of this guy was having this effect on him. Not to mention, he was fricking guy. Tyson tried to justify himself It’s probably just cause I admire him a little, yeah that has to be it, he thought to himself, as he reddened and looked the other way, quickly hurrying over to his bed, and plunging into it, to hide his little problem, Not that he had anyone to hide it from, he was alone in his room after all. Maybe just to convince ‘himself‘ that he hadn’t got a hard on from another guy. He quickly put it out of his mind.

Soon the slightly uncomfortable pain below eased, and he couldn’t be bothered to get up again, he closed his eye’s, leaving the light and his P.C on to drain the electricity when he wasn’t using them, Tyson was probably the least eco friendly guy you’d ever meet, when it came to leaving electronics switched on that was.

For the next 20 minutes, he constantly tossed and turned until eventually, he couldn’t take it anymore…He jumped up and thumped his fist into the light switch, He also couldn’t sleep with the light on, Trouble was, he was too lazy to get up and switch it off, until he had already fallen half asleep, when it got to the point that he needed to get up and turn it off if he was to sleep fully. And by this time, he was pretty pissed. Really, He was his own worst enemy.

Just before he switched his light off, he gazed over at his computer screen, still sinking with disappointment, that Kai had left like he did, and that he hadn’t come back since he had been half asleep…

Why was he so bothered anyway, he barley knew this guy, and if he was completely honest, he seemed pretty damn obnoxious, so why was it he was finding himself more and more drawn towards him.

Tyson yawned, and stumbled back over into his bed, He scratched under his midnight-blue bangs, towards his eyebrow, a little bewildered as to how things were going.

He closed his eye’s once more, this time he felt a little more soothed with darkness surrounding him, strange how something as intimidating as the darkness, brought him quite a bit of comfort.

Another 20 minutes quickly went by, time was sure getting late, and Tyson still hadn’t made it to dream land, He felt so restless, he wanted to sleep, he knew he had to if there was any chance up him getting up for school tomorrow, but there was just to much on his mind, that he felt to active to reach that peaceful place, And endless thoughts of meeting Kai were making him excited, and nervous, Thoughts of bladeing against someone who really mattered…

It was strange that someone like Kai had made him feel so restless, especially since all his female fans would agree that Kai had made them the complete opposite, But then, someone with such a cool composure as Kai’s would make any girl scream, after all, that’s what a lot of girls did. Tyson frowned; Girls were so annoying…he thought.

Well, Maybe for Tyson that was, after all he was surrounded by Hillary, Emily and Mariah, three of the most annoying girls in his class. There was that Julia girl that he got on with though, she seemed okay.

He put his head back down to the pillow, closing his eyes once more, the night slowly passed by, but not once did he fall asleep that night.

His eye’s glued open at the morning sunlight ached a little; they had been like that all night. He lent up and rubbed his neck, aches shot down passed his spine “Man I havn’t slept that badly in like forever” He grumbled, Then again, he didn’t have anything distracting him from sleep until now, so of course he slept soundly, He never had anything to excite him so much he couldn’t sleep…Tyson couldn’t quite see that though, He just thought he couldn’t sleep cause he felt pissed of about his situation, he was grateful that he had met Kai, But it just arose more problems…

Tyson finally dragged his ass out of bed. He turned off his P.C, Of which he had no messages awaiting him. And finally gave his poor electric bill a rest.

He panicked as time for school was growing closer, and his hat had decided to play hide and seek. He wasn’t playing. A sudden burst of energy came almost from nowhere as he freaked out looking for his cap.
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PostSubject: part 02   Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:44 pm

He jumped around his bedroom, throwing papers and clothes that had been thrown on the floor aside, finding nothing, he only stressed more, he tugged at his hair as he ran around like a headless chicken looking for it. He skidded into the hallway, and practically fell down the stairs, stumbling up as he noticed his hat hanging on the coat rail. He grinned, a sigh of relief as he saw his 2nd most loved possession hanging up. Dragoon of course, was his 1st love, even if he did leave him in that draw for more than 3 years.

He rushed out of the house, once again running his way too school, No wonder all that food he stuffed himself with everyday never showed, the amount of times he had woke up lately and found himself pelting to school each morning was more than enough to burn off any amount of crap he ate.

He yanked open his locker as the bell for first period rang; he quickly searched for his text books, spotting the ones he needed for music. He also grabbed his recorder, It was standard basics that every pupil enrolling in music, was to play at least a recorder, or substantial instrument. Tyson just opted for the one that didn't require payment. Most of the instruments, you had to pay a fee on, except the triangle and the recorder, which the school gave out for free.

He stuffed the black and white plastic instrument into his bag, along with his textbooks, locking up his locker he ran over to the stairs. He sighed, why did the music classroom have to be on floor 4?

He eventually reached the final set of stairs, out of breath as he glared at the last set that would lead him to his lesson. He exhaustedly climbed them after he had finished glaring and made his way into class.

As he entered the classroom, all eyes were on him, he scratched his head as he realized, for once, he had got in before the teacher. Hillary charged up from her chair and pointed fiercely at Tyson as she began to grumble "You should be grateful that Mrs. Hikari isn't here yet, because you would be in real trouble Kinomiya! Tyson shivered, He hated it when she used his last name, when she did, he knew she was real fired up, and that scared him. ‘Girls’ He thought as he twitched.

Tyson tensed "Hillary Do you ever shut up, Tyson your in trouble, Tyson Your late again, Oh Tyson, Tyson" Tyson punched his desk "Man you drive me crazy, the only annoying thing about me arriving late is hearing your squeaky voice lecturing me over and over" The class laughed. They knew Tyson was right. Tyson continued "And what’s worse is everyone knows it, you don't shut up, I really hate whinny girls" Rei shared a thought with max "Hey max, the reason he hates squeaky girls is cause he is one himself" Max giggled along with Rei at that playful statement.

Hillary blushed awkwardly "Shut up" She shouted as she ran out. Tyson flunked back down into his seat "What's her problem" Tyson grumbled twiddling a pencil between his digits. Kenny worried "Tyson, that was a little bit harsh" Tyson blinked "What?!” “Tyson, she was only trying to help you" Kenny informed as Tyson laughed out loud "Help Me?!!! Haha what a joke, she enjoys getting on my case, stupid girl" The class began to think maybe Tyson had gone a bit far after all, It was just Hillary, even if Tyson felt she personally attacked him, Her intensions were usually good, and she was like that with everyone, not to mention that she cared about her classes getting a good education, and how could they do that when Tyson was arriving late and distracting everyone almost all the time, When you look at it like that, Hillary’s moaning was of some adequacy.

"Tyson, I think you should go and apologies" Mariah announced. Most of the other student’s agreeing with her. Tyson was way to stubborn, there was no way he would apologies.

Eventually the entire classes were on top of him, it got to the point where he was feeling a little victimized. They were the ones agreeing with him a second ago, about how whinny Hillary was. Quick change of tune they had…

After a short time, he got incredibly fed up, and it didn’t seem like the teacher was ever gonna turn up, His head began to swell, and he felt so angry he wanted to explode. “Screw this I’m gone” He announced, crashing his desk forwards as he stormed out of the classroom, and through the front school gates, He didn’t really care that much for school today anyway.

When he finally arrived home, it had just sunk in how much trouble he was gonna be in for walking out of school, It dawned on him that he had just signed a ticket for a months worth of detentions, But for some reason, He didn’t care in the slightest, it felt good to be rebellious like that. And there was no where he would rather be than at home, in front of his computer, with some small hope that Kai might sign on.

Everywhere he was, He was restless, Unless he was in front of his P,C Lately, he couldn’t find peace, Kai had brought him that little bit of hope, that little bit of piece of mind, that he had been so badly longing for all this time, Now he had found that, nothing else mattered. Including boring dull school…But that also caused the problem of needing more, He was so desperate to talk with Kai again, his hope just didn’t compute.

He kicked of his converse shoes, and knelt down in front of his grandpa’s laptop, He wanted to watch T.V At the same time, which was why he opted for the laptop, they only had satellite in the lounge, not the bedrooms, but he wanted to be online at the same time, and with his computer in the other room, there was no way he’d hear if anyone singed in, He was sure his grandpa wouldn’t mind anyway….At least he hoped not.

He plugged in the charger, the green button in the corner lit up to show it was on charge, he pressed the power button and fired it up, the electronic devise responding how most electronics did, SLOW. He sighed, flicking through the many different T.V Channels as he waited for the laptop to load.

He laughed as all the crappy daytime T.V Shows appeared, he flicked 2, 3, 4, 15 channels over, there was never anything on…Until something caught his eye. He paused on channel 56, worldwide sporting news.

Hello there, I’m Kishoruki Kuri, Reporting from Perm in Russia, beside me I have the reigning beyblader champ of all time Hiwatari Kai, who has openly said he wanted to come on this interview and talk to us about his future in beybladeing.

Tyson’s eyes widened, not blinking even once as he continued watching the T.V.

“So Kai, you say that you have come in the studio today to talk about the future of beybladeing for you, and I do believe you think you have a future, to venture into a studio, everyone knows how much you hate the attention, But after so many wins, would you not agree with me when I say, what else is there for you?

Tyson blushed he had never heard Kai’s voice before, or scene him move, all he had to go on was a picture he had up on DA, and his crummy attitude from they way he acted when they had spoken on MSN. He was about to hear it, he suddenly felt nervous and excited.
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PostSubject: part 03   Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:45 pm

Kai sighed, flinching a bit, he lent back into his chair, to get a bit more comfortable “I want to keep bladeing, its all there is for me, everything about bladeing fills me with hope and happiness. To continue to do that this new tournament requires this tag team theme right?

“Right” The reporter continued, he was starting to feel the intensity rubbing off on him “So how do you go about finding a partner, after all, there’s no one who’s even been able to come close to you? Especially here in Russia.

Kai nodded “Well, that’s true, but I have a few ideas, plus I plan on travelling to all different countries to perhaps find someone suitable if what I’m thinking turns into a hoax.

“So what exactly is it your thinking? The reporter asked, shoving the mic back into Kai’s face.

Kai sighed “There is only one other person who may suspect that, and he properly isn’t around to watch this news report, which is why I choose to do it in the middle of the day”

The reporter gleamed “He?!... You speak of someone else, Could it be you have already set your sights on someone? The reporter asked. Kai certainly was mysterious.

Kai closed his eyes for a few moments “Hmppff” He shrugged, standing up from his chair “Thanks for the chat. He quickly made his exit, his scarf floating up and falling quickly back down as he escaped.

The news reporter looked back at the camera “Well you heard It here first folks, Hiwatari Kai hasn’t given up his title yet, He obviously wants his title to be taken by someone who deserves it, Not because he had to pull out after not being able to find a partner,

Tyson felt adrenaline pumping through his veins “Man He is so rude! Tyson grumbled, He was really completely clueless he hadn’t even caught onto the fact that Kai had been speaking of him on that broadcast…

“Who would have thought that such an amazing blader would hate attention and act like this obnoxious loser who tries to be cool by being mysterious. Tyson ripped at his hair. He was still going on…

He crossed his arms “If I could be a world famous beyblader, I would be polite and treat people with respect. Tyson childishly announced, not like anyone was listening.

Tyson had no idea what it meant to be famous, all the same people asking the same questions, it was no wonder Kai was so closed. Then again Kai had always been closed, Evan before he was famous. The fame only did one thing…and that was boost his ego, which wasn’t always a good thing, cause then he still acted like an ass. More so around the fangirls, even if he didn’t like to admit he was doing it….

For some reason fan girls always found it appealing to be treated like crap by fly guys, It was like some crazy turn on….or something like that. That’s what Tyson thought anyway.

Tyson sighed, switching of his T.V “Even so, I still wanna battle him” Tyson moaned. I somehow feel I have to, but would I really be able to meet with someone I met online, gramps would go nuts, I mean, even he has heard the stories of people who have met up online and never returned home, cause the other person was a mass murder or a psycho rapist…But seriously….would that happen, I mean I just saw him on T.V, no, it couldn’t happen,…hmmm…Maybe….” Tyson thought for a moment as his MSN Popped up “I’ll confront him about the press conference, that way ill be almost certain that this Kai is the same Kai, and not someone posing as him. Tyson’s grin quickly turned into a frown as he realized “How can I test him that way…what a silly idea, anyone who is a big enough fan could just pose as him and pretend, loads of people must have scene that broadcast, so the chances are this person I’m talking to will know about it weather his the real deal or not...

Tyson had got himself into a real big hole this time, he wanted to battle Kai, there was no doubt about that, but there was no way he’d be foolish enough to meet him when he could be someone else, no matter how desperate he was. Then he remembered….Webcam? Kenny had briefly told him of the small object that allows you to see into the life of someone else. By a live downloading cam that exposes your every move, If Tyson could see him on cam that would be prove enough. He’d know for sure that the person he was talking to was in fact the infamous Hiwatari Kai.

Tyson clicked the ‘appear online’ button. Almost instantly afterwards a message bar popped up….It was Kai.

“Was he appearing offline too? There was no way that he coincidently signed in that fast, after his interview too. Tyson noticed that he was using a mobile device. Strange. He thought. Suddenly he went offline again before he had a chance to even say anything.

Tyson waiting patiently, but nothing, Kai wasn’t coming back online, at least that’s how it felt every time another minute drifted by.

Tyson started a P.C Game, clicking up on an online beybladeing game to pass the time. His eyes were struggling to stay open. It had indeed been a long day. That’s what he’d say anyway, just to cover up the fact that he was being lazy.

Suddenly his MSN made a noise. Hiwatari Kai signed in.

He furiously typed into his keyboard, something that probably seemed rash and desperate, but he had to know before Kai signed off again.

“KAI!! Prove to me you’re the real deal! I need to know that its actually you? He trembled as he waited for a reply.

Kai gazed at his P.C His grey slate chunks of hair cascading over his features, Aggressive much, and I’ve been told I have issues, He thought….

“What do you mean, prove to you, why the fuck should I, I couldn’t give a damn if you thought I was Santa Claus kid” He replied.

Tyson puffed out his cheeks, Man he’s such a jerk. He crossed his arms and sighed.

Kai continued typing “What do you need conformation for anyway Tyson, I mean, who care’s if I’m the real me or not?

Tyson’s eyes shone and got all teary “Man you’re an idiot, Bladeing is something that is incredibly important to me, and suddenly out of the blue, a world famous blader comes to ME, And tells me he wants to blade ME, Do you even realize what that means, if I ever get the chance to blade you, I need to be sure that it is Kai Hiwatari who will be waiting on the other end of the airport when I arrive,... And while I’m at it did I tell you how much of a jerk you are!!!! I mean you signed out so rudely last time when we spoke, I thought when you left a conversation, you both say goodbye politely, not you, you just rushed off.

Kai began to get annoyed, someone who had started out as a fascination, had turned into an annoyance… He started to type.

“Meeting up? well Yes I wanna blade you, and yes I was originally fascinated by the look of your beyblade and your bit beast, but we have only talked twice now, and you have a real talent if you have managed to piss me off, only the second time talking to you…

Tyson felt his heart sink, he knew that he should probably say sorry but his fingers refused to touch the keyboard, he put them closer and began to type. No matter how obnoxious he was, it was wrong to jump in like that and shout at someone who was practically a complete stranger. A little thing called pride was getting in his way…

Hiwatari Kai has signed out.

Tyson felt like he could have screamed as he looked up at the screen “WHAT! He shouted smashing both of his fist into the table… “Why”
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:57 pm

Time for Tyson to go to sleep and get that much needed rest that is making him so edgy XD
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sun Jun 28, 2009 1:00 am

I like it! Keep going!!!! I love you
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:59 pm

FireKali wrote:
I like it! Keep going!!!! I love you


thanks guys, ill keep trying, im not great with writting, i came out with like a D, I have loads of ideas, but my problem i si try and rush them, i have tried to slow down the pace a little. ^^: almost done chapter 04
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:11 pm

Wow...that was good *-* Keep going!!! *whines childishly*
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:20 pm

you can has update soon prz?
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:35 am

AdventTsarev wrote:
you can has update soon prz?
*_*
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what really 0_0

I stopped cause i was failing lol...okay ill write some more then
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:49 am

Yuki-Kiba-Chan wrote:
AdventTsarev wrote:
you can has update soon prz?
*_*
this is addicting

what really 0_0

I stopped cause i was failing lol...okay ill write some more then
WHAT?! You dare quit! *shakes screen* The only way you can fail is if you quit! WRITE! Write or I won't type the KaiTaka yuri I have in store!
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:55 pm

Kiotana wrote:
Yuki-Kiba-Chan wrote:
AdventTsarev wrote:
you can has update soon prz?
*_*
this is addicting

what really 0_0

I stopped cause i was failing lol...okay ill write some more then
WHAT?! You dare quit! *shakes screen* The only way you can fail is if you quit! WRITE! Write or I won't type the KaiTaka yuri I have in store!

DXXXXX -WRITES AS Fast as her hands will allow-

I'll try and updat tomorrow...I'll sit and finish chapter 4 Razz
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PostSubject: Chapter 04 - Anybody's Guess part 1   Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:31 am

Chapter 04 – Anybody’s Guess

He caught his breath quickly, he couldn’t understand why he was getting so annoyed at Kai, or why he was feeling sick….He had never felt like this before. I mean, Yes he loved beybladeing, but this feeling rushing through him wasn’t an angry feeling from his passion for bladeing, it was something else…

He slammed the laptop close and hit his fist into the light switch, quickly before he plummeted up the stairs. He crashed down onto his bed, holding back the tears that so desperately wanted to fall as he murmured Kai’s name whimpering ‘jerk’ after it, each and every time, he just couldn’t help it, he was so frustrated, but more than that, he was somewhat heartbroken…

He had soon fallen asleep.

The air in his room soon became stuffy and hot, he bent up slowly as he awakened to re- dress himself, pulling back on his jeans and grabbing a random t-shirt from the top draw.

He quietly crept downstairs; it was late at this point and his grandpa was sure to be dead as night, but he knew how easy it was to wake his grandpa up, so he tiptoed through his house downstairs towards the front door.

He grabbed his cap and put it on his head, twisting it backwards so his midnight blue bangs fell back over his rounded face.

He twisted the door handle and stepped outside, not forgetting to put his mobile in his pocket along with his keys and some cash that was sitting on the kitchen unit.

He didn’t even know where he was going out to, but the cool air felt lush against his flustered cheeks, he just needed a walk in the night’s breeze, to ease his aching mind.

He walked down to a familiar place, the riverbank, where much of his thoughtful walks always ended up. He stared into the crystal water that glistened along with the sparkling stars that reflected from the dark black sky. He calmly smiled as he let the feelings and memories of beybladeing fill his mind like they once did 3 years ago, god did he miss it.

To have something so important, like the connection Tyson had to bladeing, something that could make you feel like you could achieve anything in life, something that could make you feel complete, magical, even flawless, something like that, well, Tyson sighed, It would hard for anyone to understand the pain of having that taken away.

He lent back and felt the grass tickle his neck as his head joined the ground. He twitched a bit, moving the grass, so it wasn’t as irritant. He gazed into the obsidian skyline of stars, the dark night clouds shadowing over him as the moonlight dazzled and danced in the ocean waves of the river below. He’s body felt drained, he didn’t appear to have much energy, he just felt so heavy as his body became sensitive to every little stone in the grass below him, He lent back up, showering his head over his legs his gaze now on the grass, his arms bent out in front of him resting on his legs, as his head fell further and further down into himself. All this confusion he was feeling was driving him crazy.

He reached down into his pocket and pulled out and old friend “Hi dragoon” He whispered, the blade glowing in the shimmers of the night sky. He had finally taken his beyblade out of his draw. He pulled out his ripcord from the side of his pants, and attached his blade to the grips on his launcher, he smiled sharply as he stood to his feet, shouting at the top of his lungs “GO SHOOT” (let it rip)

Dragoon spun out quickly and pounded through the dirty sand below, Tyson grinned as his beyblade ripped up the beach below it, crushing everything that came into contact with it. He seemed stronger than Tyson could remember. He soon stopped, and Tyson sighed. “He may be stronger than I remember, but, he defiantly needs some work, but I’ll do whatever it takes, to face off Kai” Tyson smiled remembering what Kai had said he would give him, if he actually beat him. Tyson had to do it, he needed to strive for it, Because when he bladed nothing else mattered, and for that brief moment when he let it rip a moment ago, he was so fixated on there and then, that all the other problems and feelings that were boiling up inside him, they all just seemed to fade away.

Tyson soon returned home, morning break was already upon him, damn he was tired. It seemed like so much had happened since he walked out of class after having that argument with Hilary yesterday.

He didn’t wanna wake up again in 3 hours to go back to school, when he hadn’t even been asleep yet?!! Then again, chances are they would probably just send him home anyway.

Tyson didn’t really see much point in going to sleep now, cause he knew he’d never wake up again if he did, he logged onto his p.c, Man his life had changed since Kenny had introduced him to the internet, he definitely wasn’t that bored these days, there was always something going on. He logged into his DA account and saw that he had a note, and a few activity messages, a few people had fav’d his pics. He smiled, he was quite happy that a few people had added him. After all he had been on there a while now, and besides Kai, no one else had contacted him at all, He glanced over to the side of the screen and clicked on his un-opened note.

Message From Yuki-Kiba-Chan…I wonder what this is about….

He slowly read the message aloud,

“OMG, OMG!!!! Your beyblade looks super amazing!!!!!! And you look totally good looking to!!!! I love love love you, your page is wicked, and I just…” the message went on a bit…

Tyson sighed…”Oh great a fan girl, I’ve heard of these, what are they called again Otaku or something…Man she’s annoying, she could even top hillary, wait, is that even possible?” He gritted his teeth as he thought about weather to reply or not, if he replied, he probably wouldn’t hear the end of it, but he didn’t wanna seem rude by just ignoring her. Man I’m making a big mistake he thought, as he clicked the reply button.

“Thanks so much, although I dunno how you can say you love love love …Tyson stopped, “No” he scratched his head “That seems obnoxious” Tyson sat for ages thinking about what to say, in the end he just send back a reply saying, thanks so much. I mean really, how do you deal with people like that? As flattering as It is.?

“Tyson, Mr T Man you better be too ten you’re-a-fruiting, In English that meant, you better be awake… Grandpa shouted…

Tyson responded quickly “Yeah I’m up alright” Tyson was still quite surprised his grandpa hadn’t received a phone call from school about him walking out, he hadn’t said anything to Tyson about it yet. Weird, May-be he didn’t know at all.

Grandpa granger was stunned, never had Tyson responded so quick “My training must have finally been working he thought” No, Not really gramps…Tyson did an all night-er…but hey ho.

Tyson jumped into the shower, he felt like crap, not sleeping really made his body feel dirty, When he did sleep, he woke up refreshed and clean, but staying up all night sent him a little stale…Like a piece of bread.

The water felt so relaxing as it drizzled down his tiny curves, the Japanese’s boy had a beautiful complex, and his hair seemed that much longer when it was filled with water, he brushed his hand through his dripping bangs and reached for the soap,. Slowly he massaged the soap into his skin and rubbed the smooth substance up the side up his hips and around his waist down his inner legs and torso then slowly along his penis. He carried on bathing himself with the soap, It felt good to be clean, the entire time thinking about Kai…? He hated that fact that asshole was in his every thoughts…Damn he wanted to battle him and get it over with so he could have his mind back.
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PostSubject: part 2   Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:31 am

He reached for the towel and wiped himself down, re dressing himself in his yellow t-shirt and red jacket, Anyone would think he was trying to Mc-Donald theme himself, with the colors he wore. He really couldn’t see any point in going into school today, he was still miffed with Hilary anyway and was not looking forward to another lecture, he did feel better about his disagreement with Kai after going out with dragoon yesterday, it really cleared his mind, bladeing again, after so long. He was gonna make it a point to go out every night with dragoon for spin.

He grabbed his bag and for the first time ever, his beyblade, he wasn’t letting dragoon from his sight from now on. He pelted downstairs to get breakfast, even though he had been up all night, he was still running late, that boy just couldn’t keep track if time.

He just arrived as the first period bell rang, he quickly ran to his music class, “Not the stairs” He sulked. Tyson pulled open the door, all eyes looked at him briefly, but then returned to what they were previously looking at. Hillary, be his surprise, didn’t say anything as he walked over and sat down at his desk.

The class seemed lo lag on a little, and without Hillary moaning, it was actually rather boring, He greeted Kenny, as he finished up his work. He didn’t really have the chance when he go it to say hi.

“How are you today Tyson? Kenny asked. Tyson sighed “I’m okay I guess” He smiled awkwardly. Then laughed it off. “Come one Kenny, that’s second bell, lets go” Tyson chirped, finally relieved that lesson was over.

P.E Was next. “Max, Rei, how’s it going? Kenny asked, as he and Tyson met with there friends in the boys changing room. Max smiled “Hey Kenney, Tyson, It’s been okay actually, me and Rei went out to the cinema last night, we saw an awesome movie” Tyson laughed “You mean like a date huh Maxie? He nudged Max in the arm a few times. Max started to laugh, as Tyson attention turned to Rei who was blushing brighter than a tomato. “Well Rei? Tyson teased. “Tyson I don’t really think that’s appropriate, me and max are just friends” Tyson laughed “Right” Tyson and Kenny walked over to the other side of the changing room, where their hangers were.

As they changed Tyson couldn’t help but notice the chemistry between Max and Rei, Rei was acting like a shy school girl as he revealed his bare chest In front of Maxie, the two of them seemed so playful with each other too, Tyson knew there was defiantly something going on there.

Kenny giggled “Don’t worry Tyson, I see it to, they can’t hide it” Tyson blushed a little “Your telling me” He sighed. “Is there anyone special in your life like that? Tyson asked. Kenny blushed a little “Well I have someone in mind, that I wanna ask to the end of term ball, if that’s what you mean? Tyson laughed “Really who? Kenny pushed his glasses back against his hair “Well now that would be telling wouldn’t it. “Oh chief! Tyson sobbed.

“And what about you? Kenny asked in return Tyson felt suddenly a little on edge “I dunno, I mean, some people spend a lifetime looking for the ones the love, only to end up alone, when it comes to sentimental stuff like love and relationships, I kinda feel a little unsure, I mean, I wanna settle with a family one day, but I’m in no rush, I have plenty of time for love, I just wanna enjoy now, ya know? Tyson might have been fooling himself, But all he did was think about Kai..? If that wasn’t some sort of affection what was it, you don’t spend that much time dwelling one someone who’s a mere rival, or someone you hate right? Either way the day was soon over.

Tyson walked home slowly, Today wasn’t that bad after all, Hilary did back off a bit, and no one even questioned him about walking out, Kenny and the others were just worried, which made a change.

As he opened the door and let himself in, he noticed a pile of letters on the floor, “That’s weird, we never get mail, he walked into the kitchen and placed them on the side, Grandpa, have you been ordering things of eBay again?” His grandpa walked closer and smiled “Yes! The new Harry Potter movie” He goofily grinned. Tyson sighed, a sweat drop appearing on his forehead “Right” He edged away “I’m going up stairs” Tyson crept slowly “Don’t forget this” His grandpa announced holding out a letter addressed to him. Tyson walked back over “I just checked to see if anyone had sent me anything, there was nothing addressed to me in that stack of letters” His grandpa shifted a bit as he continued talking while cooking “Oh no, that one was send via special delivery, so it arrived at noon this morning” Tyson rose his eyebrow, He gazed down at the letter and noticed something else too ‘Mr. Takao Kinomiya’ “What the heck” he shouted “No one knows my Japanese name, let alone uses it to write me mail? “What the hell” Now Tyson was more desperate than ever to open the letter “I haven’t been ordering anything, so what in the world?” He quickly escaped up stairs with his letter.

He throw his bag down on the floor, and quickly ripped open the letter, carefully so he didn’t damage its contents. He pulled out something that looked like a ticket.

He slowly read it “Return Ticket to Russia” His eyes burst open “WHAT?!!!

He pushed the button on his P.C quit violently as he waited for it to load. Why was it when he was eager to get online, that it took forever to load up.

“Finally he shouted” As MSN popped up automatically. He clicked to sign in. “Please be online, please be online” He thought.

“Yes!” He announced in joy. Kai was online. He clicked on his name as quickly as his fingers would allow.

“Hey Kai, did you send me these plane tickets??

Kai placed down his bento bowl of noodles that he had just began to eat, and shifted over to his computer at the sound of his MSN Going crazy with nudges and messages.

“Well Hello and how are you too? He asked, Being sarcastic as usual. Tyson gazed at the screen. “You can shut up with the sarcasm already Kai, your not one to talk when it comes to being polite, so just answer me already???

Kai smiled a little “Maybe. I was wrong after all, I send the tickets over as an apology, I do wanna face of against you, and I know, you’ll never be able to afford it, so I did a little investing, hope you can make it, It’s 2 weeks from now?

Tyson smiled so much his face hurt “I can’t believe it, Thankyou so much, this is what I’ve been waiting for my entire life” For a brief moment in time, Tyson felt like he was in a dream, but what was waiting back in reality for him, Was a lot of obstacles, that came along side that dream.

As much as he wanted to just take of and go there were consequences, What would his grandpa say, meeting with a complete stranger, then there was the matter of getting the time of school. But he couldn’t just sit back and not go. Even if that meant going without telling anyone, which right now seemed like his best option.

“I kinda sent you the tickets as a form of proof, you were right, I could be someone else, pretending to be me, and I should care that someone who wants to take me on is concerned about these things, it would be wrong of me to expect you to just travel out without some feeling of reassurance”

Tyson sighed “Well, I’m glad that you admit that and all, but sending me plane tickets, isn’t really proof, anyone could have sent these out, in fact that seems even more suspicious, you wont go on webcam, but you’ll go and spend a fortune on a plane ticket, what the heck?

Kai held his head “Fine, On one condition, you too prove to me your who you say you are, you go on webcam as well…” He send Tyson the option to view his webcam.

Do you accept Hiwatari Kai’s Webcam? The computer asked. Tyson quickly pressed the accept button.

“Sure Tyson said, sending the option to view him back” The both of them waited a few minutes as they connected.

A million thoughts were rushing through Tyson’s mind, what was he going to see??

Tyson blushed as Kai appeared on webcam, as stunning as he looked in all the photographs Tyson had scene, Kai was sat back, lent against a cushion in a tight black tank top that accentuated his sexy rounded muscles. Man he was hot, and that glare of his, it was so dark and deep.

Tyson held himself below…..Ahh whys this happening to me again…his a fucking guy…Tyson couldn’t take it anymore…he reached his hand down into his trousers….
Kai glared at the screen, He looked deeply at the guy on the cam, noticing he looked a little flustered. Luckily for Tyson, The cam only revealed his head, so Kai couldn’t see what he was doing.

“Are you okay? You look like your in pain? Kai asked.

Tyson put his free hand to the keyboard, and then his other one, what was he thinking, he couldn’t do that on webcam…Then Kai would really hate him. He tried to shake off his horny-ness as he typed.

“Sorry” He bit his lip “I’m feeling fine, wow, you look in top shape dude” He typed. As he realized how weird that sounded.

Kai grinned “Was that a compliment?

“What NO” Tyson typed back, flinging his head to the side. Kai laughed a little. He had never had to try and get compliments out of anyone, he always had girls telling him how amazing he was, and how good looking seemed to be. So he found it somewhat uplifting to be the one, trying to get compliments. Especially when Tyson was denying it straight after.

“In all seriousness Kai, How did you get my address??!!

“The internets a scary place isn’t it? Kai typed Tyson’s pupils widened “You shouldn’t have access to information that easily?!! He typed. Kai grinned once more “Chill out, I have connections ya know”

Tyson sighed “Okay, that doesn’t really make me feel much better though?…And why the sudden change of heart? I mean with proving to me you are who you say that is?

Kai sat there a little quite “Hmm, why did I change my mind? He thought. He didn’t even really know, its not like he’d usually make the effort to do something like this, but truthfully, the way beyblade was going…he was board, no one in Russia could even compare to his talent.

“To be honest, I don’t even know, but, you, there’s Something about you? And my instincts telling me not to just ignore you. Call it intuition.

“Hopefully my skills wont disappoint you then” Tyson laughed “The definitely wont, I’ll take you on and beat you, no sweat, if I give you everything I have, you don’t stand a chance”

Tyson had a short amount of time to sort everything out before this meeting with Kai, suddenly things were happening very quickly, but this was one rollarcoaster Tyson didn't want to get off.
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Tue Sep 08, 2009 4:32 am

Sorry for the shortness of this chapter, i was gunna combine the next chapter and this one together so it was extra long, but i write sooooo slow. But as you guys wanted a quicker update i decided to chop them in half Very Happy

But i am working on the next chapter too!!! i know everything thats gunna happen it's just writting it down Razz

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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:33 pm

HECK YESSS 8'D
that was more than okay!

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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:26 pm

O.o Okay... I say "TyKa yuri" and I get an update... Wow...
Nicely updated. ^-^
Don't orgasm in front of him Ty! I know it's hard, but resist it!
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PostSubject: Chapter 05 – Voices Tell Me I Should Carry On Part 01   Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:06 pm

Chapter 05 – Voices Tell Me I Should Carry On

Tyson lay there in his bedroom that night, holding the tickets high above his head, just staring at them, not thinking about the problems this would cause, but thinking only about what the future held for him. His eyes dazzled brightly at the white pieces of cardboard that harbored his dreams, He placed them beside his pillow, along with dragoon, and switched of the light, he knew he would sleep well that night.

The following day, Tyson was extremely excited to get into school, he couldn’t wait to tell the others about what had happened, what with the tickets and everything, He was going to finally follow his dream….He paused in thought, Maybe he should have thought this through more, after all, he knew if he told Gramps about the tickets, he wouldn’t stand a chance in going, he remembered how cautious gramps was when they moved across areas in Japan. Tyson knew he would never allow him to travel all the way to Russia to see someone he knew from the internet, no matter how much it meant to him, So telling gramps was out of the question. He had already conjured up a plan while he slept, so he wasn’t too worried, but still, it was going to be in the back of his mind until he finally got into Russia!

With Max’s help though, Tyson was pretty sure that he could pull it off, a few little lies and it wasn’t a problem. He giggled to himself.

He heard the bell ring for first period just as he walked in through the school gates, as for time, he was doing quite well today. He rushed up the many flights of stairs to music and shuffled into his chair, thankfully he made it before the Mrs.Hikari. He sat down in his chair and pulled out his textbook. There staircase barley fazed him today, he was too happy to be run down by stairs.

As the lesson drew on, Tyson found himself daydreaming once more about all the things that were to come in the next few weeks, he was so excited, it full him up with joy, he sat grinning in his chair until suddenly the teacher calling out his name snapped his attention forwards.

“So Tyson, The answer to question sixteen? Tyson looked blank, and blinked twice at her, before flipping the pages quickly in his text book to find what question it was she was challenging him on. “Errr…” Tyson panicked, No idea of the answer what so ever. She swiftly moved on realizing Tyson was clueless. He soon after sighed at her dismay.

“Tyson, you okay dude, you’re completely out of it? Max whispered from a few seats backwards from him.

Tyson turned his attention to Max; his attempt at whispering was terrible however.

Tyson attempted to whisper across the classroom to Max, But Max couldn’t quite make out what he was saying.

Hillary stood up from her chair and looked over at Tyson, giving him a glare that meant death…At that moment he knew Hillary was back to normal. He sighed and kept his voice down, after all, he was in a good mood today and he didn’t feel up to arguing with her.

Soon the class finished, Tyson paced faster after Max as they left the room. “Yo maxie, wait” He shouted, finally catching up and dragging him aside by his arm.

“Hey Tyson what’s up? Why did you pull me aside? Max asked confused. Tyson ruffled his own hair a little, his eyes shifting from the side to focus on the smaller blonde freckled boy standing opposite him.

“I was wondering if I could ask you and the others a favor. Tyson smiled, Max knew something big was coming, he arose a brow in slight confusion as Tyson went on. “Well, Look” Tyson pulled out the tickets from his bag and showed them to max, Max’s eyes widened and his jaw dropped “Tickets to Russia? How in the world did you afford those?

Tyson took a slow breath and explained everything about Kai, and about the tickets to max….

Max wasn’t stupid; he knew there was more “So, where is all this leading? Max asked, still just as confused as he was 5 minutes ago.

Tyson smiled awkwardly “I need you’re help, See, my gramps, if he found out about this, you know he wouldn’t let me go, and you know id never ask unless I was desperate…

“Just spill already! Max’s commanded, Tyson was avoiding the point now.

“I need you to lie and cover me, and pretend I’m staying over at you’re cause of a school project! Tyson sputtered out.

Max blinked, He wasn’t sure how to react, He felt a bit worried about this, He hated lying, he wasn’t that kind of person, but he had never seen Tyson so excited and he kind of felt like he had a responsibility to say yes being Tyson’s best friend and all “Ok” Max sighed, wondering if he was doing the right thing.
Tyson’s smiled widened, he was thrilled max agreed, and his goal was looking somewhat more reachable.

“Gramps will probably make a call every few days to check I’m okay, all you need to do is cover it up” Tyson said, as though it was so easy.

“What if he wants to talk to you? Max asked. Tyson thought, “Just make up an excuse, Its easy, I’m in the shower, or something” Max nodded, still not entirely happy with this situation “And the others? Max started.

“I don’t think we should tell the others, the least amount of people who know the better I’d say” Tyson advised “Easier to keep the lie to a minimum” He finished.

Max knew he was right, but still “When are you leaving? Max asked. “A week and 6 days today” Tyson smiled insanely. Every huge smile that braced his cheeks reminded max that all his worry would pay off. He was sure if it was the other way round, Tyson would do the same thing for him.

Over the two weeks that followed, he practiced harder than he had ever practiced, his hands, knees; his entire body was covered in cuts and bruises, every minute he wasn’t at school he was practicing.

Tyson didn’t dare tell Kai, all the lies he was making, He didn’t want to worry him with trivial details, besides, Tyson wanted to gain respect from Kai, not have him think he was some sissy who needed his parents consent for every little thing.

Finally the time came, It was the morning when he was getting ready to travel, everything was set, and he had set stone in play with the lies he fed his gramps, for some reason he didn’t feel so guilty about it. Tyson even managed to fill in a fake holiday form excuse with the school and forge his gramps signature for 2 weeks off. He did that rather secretly too. Max was just gunna tell Rei and Kenny he was sick.

Max travelled with him in the taxi that morning to the airport, He was rather excited for Tyson too; they took in the scenery around as the arrived at the busy airport. Max helped with Tyson’s suitcase and waited while he signed in. Tyson rejoined Max and smiled “This is it” Tyson gleamed. He could feel his heart beating faster in his chest, finally he was going to get to meet the person he spoke to online so much, the person he had utter admiration for, the person who was going to become his ultimate rival. It made him feel alive. It felt good to feel ignited once again.

Tyson gave max a hug as they parted from each other, Max waved as Tyson walked into the distance, and onto the plane. Max sighed as re returned to the taxi.

As Max arrived home, Rei was there waiting for him, he climbed out quickly and blushed at the dark obsidian haired neko and walked closer “Rei, what cha doing here? He asked. Rei smiled, his cat tooth poking out the side of his lip “Thought I’d stop by and see you, where have you been? Rei asked. Max squinted, He didn’t realize he was going to have to lie so soon. “Well, Ya see…?” Max’s speech came to a halt as Rei took hold of his cheeks in both hands “Well, Maxie? Rei pried, His eye’s moving closer as he awaited an answer. Max blushed a very dark red, pushing Rei back “Sorry, It’s Just, well…” He paused and Rei became worried. “Ya see…” Max couldn’t lie to him, everyone else, but not him. Max sighed “Okay, can you keep a secret? Rei chuckled “You know me max, not a word, now common spill” Max blushed awkwardly and explained. Rei was a little in shock as he spoke.
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PostSubject: chapter 05 part 2   Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:07 pm

“You don’t think I did the wrong thing do you? Max asked innocently, Looking up at Rei with his large needing eyes. Rei didn’t reassure him though, which was a pain, because Max really needed reassurance right now as he was feeling a little timid and fragile.

“I’m not so sure Max, we don’t even know this guy do we?.. I think you should tell Grandpa Granger, I mean, I know you only wanted to do what’s right by Tyson, but, he could be a creepy stalker rapist for all we know, and you let him go that easily, without asking any information on this guy his apparently flying out too? Are you stupid I thought you were wiser that this? Rei looked really pissed off suddenly; He was just concerned for Tyson’s welfare, but he was being a bit harsh about it. Max only wanted to do the right thing.

For the first time in his life, Max felt really angry and annoyed at himself, and disappointed that he had let Rei down. He began to sob, and the lollypop he had previously been chewing on dropped down from his mouth. “What should I do? Max asked, blubbering. Rei glared “Talk to grandpa granger, If you do, you may gain respect back from me, It’s for Tyson’s own good, you’ll see that too one day” Max already did see it, he was hesitant about the situation to begin with, as Rei walked away max felt like he wanted to cry “Rei wait…” Max shouted, but Rei ignored him. He quickly brushed the tears from his eyes, he wasn’t going to let Rei down again, A determined look spread across his features, he wanted to make Rei smile at him again, hold him again, worry again, be there for him again, he didn’t want to lose what he had with Rei over something so stupid, and he was right, he may have juts let Tyson fly out to a mass murderers house, then what, he would lose his best friend and the one he loved.

Rei hated treating little Maxie like that, but what choice did he have, Sometimes being harsh was the best way.

Max quickly ran to Tyson’s gramps house, to let him know, but now Tyson was sure to be on the plane…Still...he had to fix this. As he got there he explained the situation, naturally, he was scared and upset. And Grandpa Granger was also worried too. They tired calling Tyson’s mobile a few times over, but they couldn’t get through, Max said it would be pointless going back to the airport, because Tyson wouldn’t be there, Max watched him board the plane…The coming evening was a strenuous one, both Max and Tyson’s parents had gathered along with Rei and Kenny, They decided to all stay over at Tyson’s that night. In case of any news, which was a rather silly idea, considering there was a strong chance Tyson might call Max’s home phone.

Max crawled over and curled up to Rei in the corner, Rei began patting his head “You did the right thing” Rei smiled knowing how difficult this was for him, Max was only trying to do what was best. He was so worried about Tyson, more so than everyone else, because if anything were to happen, he felt the responsibility would lay on his shoulders, and he knew he wouldn’t be able to handle that.

Tyson finally arrived at the airport, his eyes skimmed the many people waiting around as he checked in, he was so excited, it was snowing outside; He knew he was in Russia alright; He pulled out his long grey coat and put it on. He ran over to a spare chair with his suitcase and waited. He was so full of excitement, he was about ready to explode, Any moment now, Kai would show.

Kenny opened his laptop “I’m going to try and do some research on this Kai character, we know Tyson met him on DA, so he can’t be too hard to find” And Kenny searched; he was shocked to find out how famous this Kai guy was. “You guys, this guy is really popular, his name pops up on almost all the beybladeing webpage’s” Somehow this brought them all a little satisfaction, Maybe it wasn’t a stalker, Maybe he was okay.

Grandpa Granger and Mr. Tate were in the kitchen together most of the night, just chatting; Rei, Max and Kenny spent the evening in the lounge.

Tyson’s excitement had turned to worry, where was Kai? He had been waiting a while now, he started to get anxious and it was getting colder in the airport, did they have no heating? It was early hours of the morning in Russia, so it was dark, a lot later than it was in Japan. Japan had only just started to get dark. So it was even colder than usual for Tyson.

Max flicked on the TV, not much he desired was playing, but he was willing to do anything to distract there minds from the worrying so much. Even though that seemed pretty impossible.

Tyson stood, his eye's gazed skywards, it had been hours since Kai had said he would meet him now, He felt a depending pain rush over him, his heart sank, and his eyes wept, his lip trembled as he held in his tears and frustration, he lifted his hand to his aching migraine, all his faith, all his trust, all his hopes and dreams, everything he had sacrificed and risked to be standing in this airport at this moment, it all helped to built even more anger and sadness as time passed and sooner he realized, Kai wasn't coming was he?

He wanted to wait longer, but how long would he need to wait until Kai showed? He had been there for hours, He gazed round at the airport once more, He felt like he wanted to wait an eternity just to see the blader he had heard so much about turn up and take him away...But As tempted as he was to wait there for Kai, Deep down, He knew he would be waiting forever. He wiped the tears from the corner of his eyelids, and an intensely angry grin shone over him, he paced quickly to check in desk and asked for the next return flight, Thank god these were open tickets, and not set date. A few hours later, after yet more waiting for the next flight to be sorted, he walked to the terminal and boarded the return plane. The trip home was sure to be the worst 11 hours of his life. Before he got on the plane, he gazed at the airport floor just once more, hoping, praying Kai would show.

He didn’t. The tears fell faster now and his eyes stung. He felt like a dagger of disappointment had sliced rite through his heart. And it hurt.

"What a waste" He grumbled, pulling out his IPod and switching it to high, Thousand Foot Krutch never meant to much, The words of 'Art Of Breaking' Fitted his mood perfectly. He did feel numb, and his entire world felt like it had crumbled down in an instance...He put so much hope in this chance to beyblade once more, So much of himself....

The sky soon darkened as night drew darker, there were no stars in the night sky, not even the moon let out a shimmer, nor did it sparkle, just a low yellow glow that looked somewhat stiffening. He gazed into the endless distance, his head now melting into the window. He couldn't sleep, his mind wouldn't allow it, It wasn't just beyblading, it was something else, he felt like his heart had been ripped clean from inside of him, He couldn't understand why he was feeling so much pain over being let down. He supposed that anyone would feel low if the same thing happened to them, but he just wanted to break down and cry, he felt this desperate need to talk to Kai. Even though all he wanted to do was shout at him.

No one in the Kinomiya household slept well that night, if even slept at all, they were all on edge, hope, the phone would ring at any point. But It didn’t seem to. Slowly, but surely the mornings dawn was upon them, Max was the first up, and doing the washing up, He had to do something, sitting there just dwelling was driving him crazy. Rei woke sonly after to the sound of calming music coming from the kitchen, and the dings of glasses and plates bumping together in splashes of water. The music sounded somewhat sorrowful, but beautiful at the same time. Rei peered round the door, He had never seen max looking so lost, his eyes were watering and lost, he knew that Max was worried, But he also knew that part of what he Max was feeling had something to do with how harsh he was with him yesterday, Rei felt a little upset with himself for making max feel like that, he never wanted to hurt little Maxie. He walked into the kitchen and hugged max from behind, Max blushed and froze with what he was doing “R-Rei” He murmured, looking round at him innocently. Rei smiled “I’m sorry for yesterday” Rei whispered, brushing his cheek up against max’s. Max blushed a little darker and began to cry; he quickly turned round and pulled Rei into his arm’s blubbering the words sorry as he held Rei near, both arms wrapped around his waist. Rei smiled as he held max back for a moment. They both felt safe for that small moment in each others arms.

Kai finally got to the airport, but he already knew he was too late, there was no one there waiting for him, He sighed deeply and made his way back to his car. He had been held up with press conferences today, that lasted a lot longer than he had first thought, he had been so busy that he didn't even have a chance to get to a phone to contact Tyson, and to be honest, he didn’t even think about calling him, he was already to caught up talking about him in all his interviews, Saying that he had high hopes for a partner for the coming beyblade tournament. Kai really did have a lot of hope for Takao.

As he arrived home, he signed onto his MSN, He knew Tyson would have to sign in eventually, so he left it running while he did a few things around his house, and overnight when he slept.
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PostSubject: chapter 05 part 3   Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:07 pm

As Tyson climbed off of the plane, he was hit by raindrops; he wiped his eyes as he came back down to reality. He called Max.
Max sprinted from the kitchen and grabbed his phone, all parties from every room in the house running to the room where the phone sounded “Shut up, it’s Tyson” Everyone was on edge as he answered his phone “Tyson” He commanded.

“Hey buddy, I’m back, I’ll be round in an hour or so….he…didn’t show up” Tyson said, not giving Max a chance to respond” Max sighed in relief, pulling the phone away from his ear.

“His okay, his back in Japan” Max said, watching the people around him, cry in joy and happiness. He smiled with relief, But that smile didn’t stick long, He may have got his best friend back, But for how long, after all, When Tyson found out Max had told on him, surely there bond would be broken?

“Tyson said he’d be at mine in an hour, So lets go” Max announced. Mr. Granger thought it would be better for him to stay put; he would talk with Tyson when he returned home. As worried as he was, He knew Tyson first had to deal with his friends, before he was to have words with him. Everyone else left and made there way over to Max’s.

It was raining heavily outside as they covered themselves from the water and got into Max’s dads car.

Tyson walked along the riverbank, but he didn’t feel right to sit there and stare into the ocean today, the last time he was sitting here he was dreaming about what had just been broken, and he didn’t practically feel like the weather was on his side either.

He reached Max’s door, drenched in rain, strangely, the door was already open, he didn’t think anything of it at that point, he opened the door and let him self in, as he walked in, Max was waiting in the lounge for him, he wasn’t alone, Rei, Kenny, and Mr. Tate were waiting there with him too. The unsuspecting eyes now all fixated in him. Tyson’s heart stopped in his cheats, He glared at max fiercely who was standing awkward.

“YOU TOLD THEM? Tyson shouted, dropping his case and walking nearer to max. Tyson was angry, He trusted Max. All the fury and pain built up into one explosion as he shouted “how could you? I trusted you? Max got teary “I-I’m sorry” Mr.Tate decided to have his say “Tyson, We are all extremely angry, especially you’re grandpa, how stupid are you? Flying across continents to a stranger? What were you thinking?

Tyson was silenced, He didn’t have to answer to him, He wasn’t Tyson’s father after all.

“I’m not answering to you, you’re not my father, so what does it matter? Tyson childishly spat.

“It matters to me, when me son LIES for you” Mr.Tates eyes grew angry and dark.

Tyson shrugged “He didn’t have to lie for me, I never forced him, I asked him as a favor” Tyson’s attention turned back to max as he continued “But now I wish I hadn’t bothered” Max looked very disturbed by this, he was not happy at all. Tyson was worse than he imagined him to be.

Tyson sighed as he began to speak once more “Max, I don’t want to ever hear from you again, it took you a day before you grassed on me, you couldn’t even go a DAY, a single day without opening you’re big mouth, WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU?.. you didn't even try for me at all did you?” Tyson looked really angry, But if getting angry meant distracting him from the drained feeling he had been dealing with the last 12 hours or so, It was something. He’d rather feel fury than pain.

“Tyson I” Max started.

“SHUTUP MAX” Tyson screamed, cutting him off. Rei couldn’t watch this anymore, it was feeling a little too awkward.

“Now hang on a minute Tyson, do you even know the trouble max has gone through for you? Rei glared.

Max interfered “Its ok Rei, I deserve it and i...”

“NO” Rei shouted, “It’s not okay, you’re dad went mad at you, not to mention it caused problems with me, and all because we were worried about you Tyson, All of us have been sick to death, going out of our heads with worry, it was me who persuaded max to do the right thing and speak with you’re gramps, as well as his father, because anything could have happened to you, and then what? What if it had been some crazy person waiting for you at the airport? Are you a TOTAL IDIOT?

Tyson shouted again “You guys don’t understand, NO ONE UNDERSTANDS. You have no idea how I’m feeling right now, you’re lectures aren’t helping me at all, But you don’t care, you say you do, but all you’re doing is shouting at me, can’t you trust my judgment, I can take care of myself YOU KNOW, I’m NOT stupid, I wouldn’t have flown to all the way over to someone I didn’t trust?

“How the HELL can you trust someone who stood you up? Rei asked.

Tysons punched the wall with fury. Rei suddenly saw the hurt in Tyson's eyes.

Tyson was really pissed now, he knew he had to leave before he said or did something he regretted “I’m leaving now” Tyson announced in a very low tone husky voice.

Max ran over to Tyson and pulled on his arm as he went to leave, Tyson shoved him off to the side, and he tumbled to the floor “Leave me alone” He shouted.

“But Tyson..?” Max stuttered once more.

Tyson smiled with an evil grin from the comer of his lip “Why don’t you tell DADDY, How you can Rei have been at it, tell you’re dad about you’re little faggot activities, eh max? Because you’re not angel when it comes down to it, LETS FACE IT, We all know you guys are SCREWING!!!

Max’s eyes widened, He never thought Tyson knew, let alone would dare to announce it in front of his father, who, I may add… was very homophobic.

Max’s dad stared at him “ Max, This isn’t true is it? TELL ME IT’S NOT TRUE? Fury filled his veins.

Max looked over at Kenny, Tyson and Rei “I think you guys should leave. He said. Rei didn’t want to, he was worried, He knew how Max’s dad was sometimes. But he didn’t really have much choice “Max, Call me later? Rei said as he walked away. Max nodded “Go”

Rei walked over to Tyson as they left and grabbed him by his shirt “I really HATE you right now, LOOK what you’ve done? And ALL, because the people who care about you were worried, you’re a jerk Tyson, Don’t come near me again. Tyson really wanted to shout at Rei, and tell him he was wrong, but he knew he wasn’t “Shut up Rei” Tyson said, But Rei was already leaving. The only person Tyson was really pissed with was Kai. Not only had that basted caused him enough of his own problems, But he had just lost all of his friends over him too.

Kenny watched as his friends parted and felt stuck. He didn't want to see them falling out, and suddenly he started feeling like maybe this was his fault, if he had never introduced Tyson to the internet, this would not have happened in the first place.

Tyson ran as fast as his legs would take him, till he met his house, He quietly let himself in, so his grandpa didn’t notice. Never did he think he would weep in his room at this time. By now, he was supposed to be in Russia, having the time of his life. Everything was going wrong, He was hurting so much, right now, he just wanted to fade away with the pale stars. He gazed into the endless sky for a while, his thoughts taking him back to the airport every moment. And the pain he felt.

Everything was screwed, He thought to what he had said, He was worried about Max. He really shouldn’t have said what he did. He felt all over the place and it scared him.

He lent up from the bed at the sound of his MSN, His eye widened “KAI” He shouted. He rushed to his pc and began to type…
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PostSubject: Re: FanFiction (18) 'Incomplete' update :) chp 5   Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:34 am

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